I really like this. I thought it was well done and I am holding on for that "Torfan" bit, when oh when will I get my joys?

Still loving it!

I'm really liking this through other perspectives, this is my first one reading from a perspective other than Shepard's (well technically not first but it goes more into it). The way they all interact with each other... damn, it really brings me joy tbh, oh and Wrex, darling Wrex!

OH SHE DID OMG

Yes, I loved walking in on the conversations in ME3!

Also damn, I think your Ashley fit Ashley pretty well and that was just funny like mate good chapter!

Nice job. Thanks for sharing!

I love your changes!

IDIOT!

Lol, I just imagined Shephard singing Why cant he be the king I know he is" from the lion king about Wrex

professional questioning huh? How very Guantanamo of them.

I truly enjoyed this chapter. I particularly appreciated the thoughts on dragging Liara and Tali into the life of a soldier. It is something that I want to explore as well.

Laaaaammmeeee. So, they *don't* get together, they don't even *kiss*, as Shepard is just too much of a p to woman up, and accept/love Liara. *And* you don't even have Liara on the ship when it gets taken down D:
You just changed things WAY too much for it to be enjoyable.

Wickedly good stuff! Been reading enthusiasticly and just decided to leave some delighted feedback on the way to yet another chapter.

*lets out a quiet breath* Did Liara...just shoot her mother... o.o

I loved loved LOVED the interactions between Tali and Liara! :D

LOL, did Shepard steal the ambassador's chocolate? LOL XDD