Awwwh! I truly enjoy this one shot series! I love it! :D

Oh dear, my favorite part... how much I love these sort of scenes, *sadistic smile* thank you.

it's just that... it's too short for my liking but the story's good.

w-whaaa... that's cruel, if only germany knows. if only.

*shots prussia's parents*

am sorry.

OMG! thats so cuteeeee! 33

Great story! Loved the ending.

This makes me smile alot. I like bittersweet moments.

*smiles innocently* Then you may hate my next suggestion. If you take these oneshots you can expand some moments and make more and have a whole nother universe going-an actual story or random oneshots based off this. Great chapter and glad to see it.

Great. Perfect (enough for me anyway). But a sixth and seventh and eighth and ninth chapter would be nice to (the funeral visit to the grave thoughts and Ludwig's death. Maybe a tenth for the reunion of the two brothers and eleventh for their lives as dead brothers)... please?

noooo gilby! why! you no dieeee! DX

thats so awesomeeeeeee! 3333

update soon please! XD

awwww! bad ludy! update soon please! i beg you! XD

Wow. That's powerful.

I know that if something happened like that, I would try to protect my brother too, but at the same time I'd wonder what Gilbert is, is it worth my life.

I'm excited to see where this goes.

So I like the concept, but maybe you could make your chapters longer by adding more description and make me feel like I'm in the story. Also, I think you'd get more reviews if you made your summary more intriguing... :)

Happy writing!