Reviews for The Story that Never Was
Fanfictionlover1991 chapter 33 . 5/6/2013
HAHAHAHAHA! I can't stop laughing at the way they've been doing! Keep up the good work! This story is so funny!
Guest chapter 91 . 7/19/2012
Hallo! So glad you updated again! Been following this story since it first started, but I was a ghost reader, and sorry for that!
I don't wanna seem rude, but I wanted to point out some umm mistakes in your chinese han yu pin yin? "tao" should be "dao" for 到,I'm assuming, and the second phrase should be "cai guo qiao" for 才过桥.
Again, love this story! Died laughing so many times re-reading this! :D Looking forward to your next update again! :D
Mojave Vixen chapter 92 . 2/2/2012
YAY! an update! Way to go Ayako-san ~

Aw! poor Jess. And of course Duo doesn't help much does he? Naughty Duo!

I can't wait to see how Jess and Sally get Duo back. Hope you are doing well. Sorry I haven't written in like forever. Real life. What can you do?

When I get some time I will write you a proper letter.

Update when you get a chance! I shall wait anxiously!

Ja ne~
Mojave Vixen chapter 91 . 4/20/2011
YAY! Ayako-chan! This chapter was awesome! Sorry I haven't e-mailed you for awhile but, busy busy busy! _ this is Moonfighter by the way. Or silver Kitsune...lol. yeah, by the way I like the way you did the humor in this chapter...Duo is my favorite! lol, and they way you made those other girls suffer was awesome! but I cried for jess when she couldn't go home yet. T.T sad! anyway, hope to e-mail you soon! I'm now 24 today! lol I'm getting old. Hope you update soon also!

p.s. I love your translations! Moar pwease!
SilverKitsuneNoTenshi chapter 90 . 1/14/2011
Hey Ayako! I barely got back into reading fanfiction and decided to check to see if you updated. nice to see your still writing. I also loved chapter 89 it was HILARIOUS! LOL Soon I will type you and e-mail like I used to do...and then maybe we can catch up. Hopefully anyway. Stay safe and happy during this new year! Hope to see a new update soon.

Ja ne!
Shadow Traveler chapter 88 . 2/8/2010
Awesome story - it just makes my day when I read it. Nice job on the wedding, I can't wait to see where this story goes next!
Dragonpit chapter 88 . 8/7/2009
A unique and funny ending to a completely unusual series of events. Again, it's 'Heero,' not 'Hiro.' Still, and don't get me wrong on this, I enjoyed your story, I'm glad it's over. I can't wait to see what else you've got for the last few chapters.
Bunny chapter 88 . 7/21/2009
lmao.. as always a wonderful chapter. And quick thinking by Jess on the rings. Fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter. 3
Aldwyntor chapter 87 . 3/17/2009
love the story!funny as need to update it!
ZD87 chapter 87 . 1/4/2009
i hope you update soon. _
Shadow Traveler chapter 87 . 1/3/2009
I can't believe that this will be ending so soon! Oh well that is the way these things go. I can't wait to see what kind of excuses Treize will come up on the spur of the moment to all of Une's questions. And what are those boys up to storming into that maids room?
Vitanie Tora chapter 87 . 12/30/2008
It's been awhile and took me all of five seconds to remember what was going on. Once that happened I couldn't help and laugh at Treize's expense. Nice chapter and can't wait to see what happens next, so until later

Tora-chan
Dragonpit chapter 87 . 12/25/2008
It's hyper-critical time! Let's get started...Well, there are some minor grammar errors here and there. You had Jess say, "...it is rather sentiment." at one point. You forgot the 'n' in 'wasn't' at another. Otherwise, I think you did pretty well here. I think you're well on your way to setting a record for 'most chapters in a fanfic.' However, I find myself wondering what the plot is. I mean, you've spent so much time on this excursion into the girl's academy, and yet you haven't established one, unless that is the whole point of the story, with the 'wedding' as the climax. But then, that doesn't give a lot of point to Wufei's coma earlier. So what's the plan here? You don't have to tell me. As a writer, you probably shouldn't until you're ready to reveal it in the story. I just want to make sure you know where you're going with this. That said, if you're planning to continue this for some time past this 'arc', you might want Jess and Wufei to continue seeing Meiran in the future. Not in dreams, mind you. I think it would be interesting for them to just see her wandering around every now and again. But that's just my opinion. Well, anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait until you update again. 'Till next time...
Remiera chapter 86 . 9/28/2008
EIGHTY SIX?

HOW THE HELL?

O.O

...

I'm shocked.

I stopped coming to FF.n at about... 47 I think it was.

I feel bad now too... ;o;
Honakaa-Honami chapter 86 . 9/24/2008
Arg! why did it have to even! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
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