Fantastic story. Well written, good plot, excellent characterization.

But you left poor Steve hanging...

Great story...I could feel the empathy among the characters

Reading this after knowing that Danny really is Charlie's father and that Rachel flat out lied, makes it even sadder. Great work.

I really liked the unspoken thoughts of the characters in this story. What a great way to peek inside their minds! Wonderful job, as always!

This Story is just amazing it gets better ever time I read it !
Thank You so much for sharing it
Robin

Chin the wise one. Used the one thing/person that could get through to Danny .

That was so good!

So very well done..I read this in one sittting.
Good work!

This was a wonderful story. You really captured Danny's utter despair and depression. and the team's loving support for their suffering friend. I love your emotional/angsty Danny-centric stories that you write so incredibly well. It's too bad we don't get to see plots like this on the show.

GOOD...but, this calls for a FOLLOW-UP...poor steve and even poor sam.

alisa

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wow so intense! I couldn't stop reading till the end really loved it.

I hope the team finds Danny in time. And where's Lori?

Poor Danny. He's really depressed, but I hope he pulls out of this.

That was such a great story.