Reviews for Perseus Jackson: Champion of the minor gods
Mkhwaja chapter 12 . 10/5
This is the perfect Percy betrayed story. Explanations, stuff makes sense, people don't act like idiots. If this was finished it could be one of the best pjo fanfics there is.
HERECOMESJUILIES chapter 1 . 10/2
bad athena! bad zues!
Yesse2362 chapter 12 . 9/28
Insane but insane awesome.
Shows the cruel reality.
Some things are a bit too ooc or brutal for my liking but it’s still a Good Story.
I wrote that book in 4 years so I have hope you could actually update this again.
Normally I’m pessimistic but yeah.
Bye
Yesse
ZSlaya chapter 12 . 9/26
NOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER WHY? Anyways this is freaking amazing and better than most if the *"Percy was betrayed"* fics I read. I eagerly await the finishing touches on this.
mfgAnonymous chapter 2 . 9/3
what would terrify Ares? hm.
doves.
nasty, peckish little things that represent peace and love and all that yuck. filthy white little feathered demons in disguise.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/23
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LITTLE NEED MORE SLUT
TheSeaSpider chapter 4 . 4/27
MPD, or, more commonly called dissociative identity disorder (DID), is a result of specific trauma that causes a new personality to form, and is not a result of stress. The disorder often forms at a younger age, around the ages 7-12, though it is rare for it to form later in life. Your personality could be in your mind, though the host may not realize it, for years at a time. It is very likely that Percy would have realized it, due to the trauma he has faced in early life. He would have gained multiple "personalities" by this point, and would have realized it. Though you have only touched at the subject in this story, it is a very sensitive topic that must be deeply researched before attempting to diagnose or explain it. I believe what Percy is going through in this story is simply a deeply manifested form of PTSD.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/4
PLEASE CONTINUE! This storyline is so enrapturing and AI can’t handle the suspense! I love how you wrote Artemis and Thalia’s redemption! Please update!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/24
PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEW CONTINUEEEEEE
Dumpster chapter 12 . 10/2/2019
AWESOME
Guest chapter 5 . 8/7/2019
i will actually track you down and fucking murder your family after brutally torturing them the use every torture method i know on you as i slowly kill you
facelespai chapter 12 . 2/28/2019
first time I read your story and I have to be honest... I freaking love it!
oympians r evil chapter 2 . 1/20/2019
jars
Morpheus Rex123 chapter 12 . 12/14/2018
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/3/2018
I’ve never been so goddamn lost in my whole fucking life. What the actual hell. Love it tho ;)
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