Love this story please hurry and write more like these!

I'm being honest here, I thought it was really good. A few mistakes and things that didn't make sense to me came but it was still good.

This definitely entertained me! Yay, more of Nafalis, the best OC ever! Squee! I wish Yuu was a bit more active, though. Haha, a mountain lion! I half expected Kyouya to jump out of nowhere and scare the crap out of Ryuuga! XD