This is really good. I love reincarnation stories and I like this one a lot, it's really original.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter:)

Hi I came back to see if you have updated but you haven't :(((( I honestly love your story so far and it has so much potential. Please continue pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase please please!

AAAAAHHHHHHH OMG THEY MEET NEXT CHAPTER OMG

um.

excuse my freak out but um. sorry.

another great chapter as usual! I could never work on deadlines myself, so I'm seriously impressed by your determination! :)

Oh my God, I can't wait, and I loved how you connected the episode "Zuko Alone" with the pregnant lady in this chapter. And I'm interested in how you'll work in the Pai Sho tile that Mako has. Love the idea for this, and I'm really excited to see how you execute it!

SNO.

P.S. And I found one mistake in there: It's in the flash back, when Zuko sees the man cooking the PIECE of meat, not the peace of meat. Just thought you might like to know.

Beast x) I was kinda scared they were gonna kill the pregnant that would of sucked anyway thanks for the great chapter update soon. :)

Oh, things just got real!

Nice chapter. I love the action in here.

Why do I have a feeling this won't end well... XD

just one question, but are you making up these dates, or are they accurate?

Awesome! Can't wait for next Saturday I will see you then chou. ;)

whelp, that escalated quickly. xD

OMMG I MISEED YOU AMD I MISSEED THIS STOREY AND OPPS MY TYPINF IS ALLL MESSEDD UP HAHAHAAHHH

This is really good. It has some serious promise. I can't wait for your next update.

please continue its such a great story i love the concept!:)

Wonderful story :) keep up the good work :)

Yeah! Argh! That was so freakin amazing thank you so much for updating again I missed this story update soon. X3

Wicked.