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This is a pretty good story! And Natsu and Lucy are so cute :). It's really too bad you haven't updates in so long...

i want lucy to agree to gray's request.i think gray will find out soon.

I have to say, I love this story! Natsu being protective over Lucy! XD great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

wwwowww updatee please!

woohoo lovedd it

It's cute. DO continue. This chapter was very similar to how Fairy tail began except Lucy was a princess and her magic: she was very new to it. I was a bit surprised about Natsu referring to Lucy as a best friend since they've only just met. BUT Anyway I'm looking forward to the changes of how you'll play this story out. I just love the hiints of nalu here. Natsu's not as dense. He seems more aware that Lucy is actually a woman and he, himself is a teenager. Just the sound of Gray calling for Natsu spells things very different.

Aww, kawaii! I'm so happy with how the story's going and I don't think you should change anything! Nice grammar, correct spelling, following a solid storyline... all in all, I'd say you are doing an excellent job! (Also, I think the authors note thing is a good idea!)

Good job! A little thing though, its really not a big deal, but I think this chapter seemed a tad bit verbatim to the anime/manga. Again, not a big deal, because this seems more of a transitional chapter, and things are getting more exciting. Again, great job!

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This fic is beautiful and I think that its really good!

Its really ingenious.

:3

I really like this so far! Its quite interesting. :D

:D

woohoooo

supeer story update soon

ooh update reeall soon