It's a sad sight to see a story with so much potential- much better than canon- to be abandoned. I was so looking forward to seeing the death of Houki- seriously I never liked the girl- and Madoka.

Please come back and finish this please I beg of you

Is good

When I think of Dan, I don't think Dan, I think Kirishima

essa história até agora fez o que nenhuma outra fez: chamou a minha atenção, ela é bem elaborada até mesmo nos mínimos detalhes e espero um final para ela.

Why exactly is Ichika being a jackass to everyone?

Hey man, nice job on this fic overall, its one of the longest and most developed fic I have seen in a while for IS, hope you continue

Man, this story didn't start of to become this dark.

Houki's Betrayal, Cecelia's Death, the Academy Destroyed, And Now Houki is supposedly dead, but alive in a mechanical sense?
Man, Ichika will have to basically either kill Houki or somehow save her, and seeing that his parents and sister are just completely messed up in the head? I feel that Ichika is going to actually enjoy killing both his mother and father and twin sister in cold blood.
Are his mother and father the leader of Phantom Task? Is that actually part of the Manga/Anime? Or is this just something to make sense since I don't recall from watching the Anime, there actually being references to his parents. (I might have look that up.)
Anyway, this was really enjoyable, and interesting, and since there are very few of these fanficts, this is one of the few that are actually truly good...no offense to all the other ones though)

Houki the Terminator

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Hey! This is pretty good!

Well i kinda liked full tsundere Houki, yet you killed her. Well, i will keep eye on this fic, tho i would like to see one fic someday, that will go along with idea like yours, where Houki becomes "evil" or just plain tsundere that wants to kill every other "competitor" but then is offered coming back to pack. I could do scheme for it, but i dont want to write it, i want to read it. Well anyway, good job on keeping dark theme all along, setting Ichika with just 1 girl (and on top of that one of my favorites! (Char and Houki)) sow i'm going to keep waiting for next chapter! Keep your work up and see you soon!

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Hello Endon, I must say that your version of Ichika is simply amazing his like the light version of the Ichika from Fangking2s' Soaring of the Doukugan Ryu! Orimura Ichika!.

Also if you write anymore IS fanfics I would like to be a beta reader.

Yours sincerely Vorskull Stormblade
Non sit alius deus

Houki turns cyborg, does she? I just love the story so much. It's a great story. Is Ichika going to kill Houki?