Neville:(squeezing his remembral as it turns red with smoke) The problem is I can't remember what I've forgotten.

London Knight .
No I don't think she's a Mary Sue - some people can't get past the fact that their can be individuals who are brilliant at what they do . Is canon Hermione a Mary Sue ? I have an IQ pushing 170 & a near eidetic memory - am I a Mary She ? I had a Warrior/Rouge Half-Elf Character in 2nd Edition AD&D who went from 2/3 Level on Athas (Dark Sun Campaign) , to be a Adrimal of a Fleet for a load of SpellJamming Freedom Fighters at Level F18/T19 in a highly magical SpellJammer/PlaneScape Campaign ; was he a Mary Sue ?
All opinions should be presented , but your OC IMHO is not . Parts probably need to be tweaked or rewritten , but that could be said about any fics . I will call you on any Americanisms sneaking in though - living in Surry/London & having a unique perspective on 'Britishism' , I'll be kind ... ;-) LK out .

what a wonderful story. You have done a remarkable job with respect to the original story

Always good for a different poi t of view. Slytherin is a great house, always wanted someone's view from it!,

I just wanted to review because I love your stories. All of them. And yes people are jerk wads. Like the rude person who commented a few reviews ago. Yes people make mistakes but don't be a twat about it. And I think melody has a wonderful story. And your a fabulous author. :-) I don't review usually but I love your story enough to take the time. I can't wait for more updates.(this is the second time I read this story.)

i lovre this story anbd how she is loyall to her dad. ive seen the other stories and i love how she doesnt betray her dad for love or something like that xx

Ok so I've just started reading and
1. Hogwarts is in Scotland
2. I'm guessing voldemorts her father but he's a halfblood not a pureblood
3. You don't apparate to Hogwarts you get the train from platform 9 3/4

Have you even read/seen any of the harry potter books/films.

LOL. I would've laughed. Most definitely! I mean, c'mon, SNAPE fell? And you DIDN'T laugh? Bloody Slytherins...

Brooms for cleaning haha!

Awesome!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

When will she be Sorted?

Sorry, dearie author! I read the third one, but didn't discover until now! Great, love the whole blessed series!

I really like this, hope she's going to be friends with the twins :P

Good Story :) Update Again Soon Pleaseee!