This is interesting please continue this.

Very good

Very good, I look forward to the next chapter

I love readin through this tbh

Who? What? Why?! I have so many questions!

This will be the fourth/fifth time I'm flipping through this fic.
I know my words won't seem much when this the Higurashi fanfiction bank just seems to be losing its potential, but I truly wish this story would be continued. It is the best I read in the entire Higurashi fanfic.

On a side note, this may be useless info for you, but I wish to refer to this fic while writing my own time loop fic in Shingeki no. I won't copy off it, just maybe study the basic structure of how you organized the many lifetimes and implant it within my style. Hope you don't mind :)

This chapter is good in terms of dramatic development - though some parts of dialogue could have been shorter, particularly considering the dangerous circumstances - and I really like Ryan's confession to himself, that he can't harm Rena, because he loves her. On the other hand, like others said before, the idea that the Hinamizawa Syndrome can be controlled by willpower and then used to add superhuman powers to the patient, is - in my opinion - too different from what it's like in canon. I also think - though I don't want to force my opinion on you - it does a story no good to make one character far superior to the others in terms of knowledge, physical ability, willpower, and so on, because it reduces the significance of the other characters. Anyway, I'm really curious how your story will develop. By the way, as far as I know, "Die!" in Japanese is "Shine", not "Shini". The latter rather means "... to die" or "... and die" (like in "Shini ike", "Go and die!")

I hope I'll be able to write a longer review later. For now, there's just a tiny issue about this chapter I came upon: Mion and Shion's given names are written with two kanji characters each, so when Shion wants to conceal her identity in her letter, she would have to blot out the first character (the "Shi"). You can't write S, M or H as single letters in Japanese.

Hi,

I'm reading Kishi no Kakera at the moment and it's quite enjoyable, it has almost no typos or other mistakes at all which makes it very easy to read. As far as the story is concerned, I'm enjoying it though I generally prefer stories which are not centered around an OC. About the title, I like it but if you want to translate "Fragment Knight" into Japanese, it would have to be "Kakera no Kishi". "Kishi no Kakera" means "Fragments of the Knight", or "Fragment of a Knight", or so.

what happened? all of a sudden you stopped two years ago.

Chapter was good, but I still miss rika. Can't wait for the de-time skip. Glad your back however! Thought you gave up on it!

Nice to see this new chapter!

I am wondering how Ryan will move on to the next world with these many attachments to this certain one.

So far, out of all the worlds, he has a very long and large investment on this one, so I don't think him leaving will be such an easy thing...

Yay your back! I'm glad! Another great chapter! I'm excited for when Ryan goes back! Knowing you though, I bet there's a little twist probably! Keep up the good work and again, I'm glad your back!

True, this chapter did feel a bit redundant... Though with this, the issue about Ryan dying soon is brought up. I do wonder how he intends to fix that one...

I find that I have a hard time reading a story that's unfinished, so I'm gonna wait until Tokaisenso-hen is complete.

But I must say, this story has been absolutely wonderful so far. Definitely favoriting his one.