continue it please

Hahaha, el final estuvo bueno!

it was a oogie but still cool.

that was really good, I loved it. Nice picture too!

YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE STORY! :D this story is one of my favs! from the moment I strated reading it, I LOVED IT! whoever's with me say: continue the story lightskin!

Well if they can't do it there, how about outside in the springs? Just kidding it's awesome!

Let me tell you this, everyone is off every once in awhile. So don't beat yourself down for that. Just think about what happened and try to make it better. I bet that no one even noticed at all. 'Gives a thumbs up.' I give you good luck on your future stories. Oh sorry I mean good luck times a thousand and 38.

very good

Ha ha! I LOVED the way you ended it! XD great job!

I seen your picture I go by ALonewolf009 on DA and absolutely love that picture you drew :3

love :D 'Don't tempt me so!' ahhahahaha

Ha. Nice fluff!

Love it! i wish there were more stories about the Promise - kataang ;)

ZHUY here!

Pretty Good story

Nice fluff.

You should hit the return key more often though. It's hard to read when all the dialogue is stuck in the same place as the descriptions and all. Just remember to newline each time someone different speaks and it'll be much more readable.