Reviews for Severed |
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dtihanyi chapter 1 . 7/4/2012 water you doing with my feelings omg |
floodimoo123 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 Oh my God. She was actually going to commit suicide. |
Ghosts of the Past chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 I love it. I really loved the ending of LOK. Total Makorra in the future. |
Amber Faith chapter 1 . 6/25/2012 Didn't recognize your writing style! The implication of her contemplation of suicide was subtle but powerful once you realized it was there. I don't think that had been her ultimate resolve though when she left the house. Definitely caught the angst in this. It was well written, but I wasn't crazy about the center page format. Keep up the good work. |
cnnoujaim chapter 1 . 6/24/2012 just. good. great. amazing. FREAKING AWE INSPIRING. |