This was a great story. It was difficult at times to read in my head when the words the American characters were saying were so clearly British (and made me read it as British-speaking in my head which messed with my mind a bit) but overall the storyline was well written.

I’ve had doubts with this story back in the past but I’ve decided to read this. I’m happy I did!

Aw! I loved the chapter!

Hello :-)
I enjoy your stories, this one not being an exception. So thanks for writing them!
Feedbackwise i have to say: it was sad to me that Bella's and Leah's relationship seemed less important than L&P and B&P. They get much more room than Bella and Leah, in dialogue as well as in action, and definitely in everything m rated.
Kirrin being a single use plot devise ticking a lot of cliche 'weak' boxes seems a bit of a waste.
It's obvious that you love these characters, even writing more chapters when the story to me seemed clearly finished.
Thanks for all your creativity!

Oh shit.

I like your stories.
But here something's seriously troubling. Being wet is not a yes, only yes means yes. Please research arousal nonconcordance. And Bella is not even reacting to the fact that this wasn't something Leah wanted.
That's normalising sexual violence..

I LOVE THIS BOOK ITS BEAUTIFUL we hado ur ups and downs bur i couldnt put it down finished in 2or 3 days. They kidna blurred together tbh

It's like my 4x reading this story and it still makes me laugh where " Sam thinks he turn Leah into a Lesbian". Or where Paul makes that wounded puppy sound. As I read I see it happening and its freaking funny.!

"Beware of Fred!" Bwahaha So many great lines in this story.

I had forgotten the were-porcupine description - so perfect for Leah. Made me laugh.

I love the "little lost boy" description of Paul in these chapters - we so rarely see the vulnerable Paul despite his horrid backstory. At least he has a loving dad in this one. Fun rereading these - surprised by how much I'd forgotten.

I have read this story more than 5xs I wonder what Paul was thinking ehen he saw Kirrin slap Bellas hand... I get he did growl at him but i still think that he did cuz Leah did. I hope that u write more awesome stories like this one.

Oh my gosh! Another amazing story that you have written! I absolutely loved it! I hated all the stuff the three had to go through and loved how it all worked out in the end!

omg I loved this story so much so happy to see the years later and that Alice and Jasper was coming back quite the emotional rollercoaster but happy it turned out love it thanks

This is the kind of incredibly good fic that makes you forget that the canon is totally different. Love love loved this Leah and Paul, and Bella too! Not sure why I didn’t read this earlier but so glad I did. So many wonderful parts. Will definitely reread in the future. Looooove!

Absolutely loved this from beginning to end!