Reviews for An Eclipse in time
Roxhall1 chapter 13 . 12h
I am a sickly mom of 3 that is stuck at home daily with nothing but stories like this one that helps me get out of my head and frees me of my every day pain/suffering makes me focus on something other than my pains. Please can you make another Bella time traveling story?! I have been reading this one with Elijah and the other one with Niklaus numerous times already and still can't get enough of them . So please make more Bella time traveling stories PLEASE?! With either Thor, Loki, Captain America, Tony Stark, Bucky Barnes, Aquaman, T'challa from The Avengers/Jasper, Carlisle, Emmett, The Vulturi kings, The Vulturi gaurds, Peter, Garrett, Benjamin, Sam,Nahuel, Ephraim, Paul from Twilight/ DamonStephan Salvatore, Tyler Lockwood, the Michaelson brothers, Alaric (Vampire DiariesOriginals).. I love how you make her into a independent, strong and super powerful supernaturalnot a weak, dependentpathetic girl. Would love to see your time traveling stories.. maybe space travel in the far future or another world or universe .. I have the imagination, but writing as in putting it on paper is not my strong suit(let me knowing you're in need of ideas, roxhall1 gmail although your work is brilliant as it is!) ... Love your Bella stories and can't wait for more! Keep up the fabulous work!
andrewpine chapter 10 . 6/7
Losing...
The world will be a much better place when Tatia is gone.
Wonder how pissed Ayanna will be when she finds out Ester has changed the plans for Nik
and there will be no use for a doppelganger in the future?
Does she use honey or molasses when she makes her pies since sugar wasn't around then?
Fatalromance chapter 13 . 6/7
This was absolutely beautifully written. I love this story so much.
andrewpine chapter 5 . 6/7
What did you rewrite? There are still misspelled words in this version. chap.2.
Committee.
We're the wolves sent by Ayanna I wonder if they are zeroing in on her instead of the three men? Chap.3
Mikael
I ma curious if they know there are weres that close to them why not wait until the full moon is over then hunt them down and kill them.?
How would they know about cold one if they are supposed to be the first vampires and actually older then them no matter what they tell their breed?
I wonder what changed in the future by keeping Henrik from dying?
She really needed to fill out some this isn't her time period. in this time they needed to be able to fight well with their swords.
Annie48 chapter 13 . 5/30
I absolutely love it.
Mizucolk chapter 13 . 5/27
Love
kikistimi chapter 13 . 5/21
I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for your work!
beckylovestwilight chapter 13 . 5/16
Loved it xx
NegansGirl2020 chapter 4 . 5/13
Yeah see I dont think being a shape shifter should be an option shes already changed so much by saving Henrik. Nik should become a hybrid but with the attitude change he wouldnt become the crazy hybrid. I dont think Bella should of met the cullens after going back in time
NicoleR85 chapter 13 . 5/12
I am so glad that you finished this story. I loved reading it. Thank you for writing it.
Roxhall1 chapter 1 . 5/11
I'm loving your Bella time traveling stories! If possible, could you please make more?
babymama2020 chapter 1 . 2/7
You spelled BONNIE WRONG
Twilove0624 chapter 11 . 1/15
Please update this story soon !
Roxhall1 chapter 1 . 12/23/2019
I love your Bella time travel romance stories! would love to see more
Tilty.bbb chapter 11 . 12/1/2019
This was a fantastic read well done
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