You miss spelled Lin's name in this chapter. You spelled it Len.
Great story so far!

Loved the fic! Great work~ n the fun part! It resembled corpse party in the ghosts torture style n image u gave us by description xD

I like it! You've made an incridible horror story. More often than not Ghost Hunt FF lack the actual horror factor. But you can get the creepy scary factor to the T. Even though I think healthy rivaly between Mai and Masako would be interesting. But over all I like it! Thank you for making duch a nice story :D

Worriment is not an actual word.

I don't think you made naru oc ...,...,..personally from reading the manga watching the anime and reading bits and pieces of a translation of the novel

So good!i can't wait to read more! I should be doing my homework but... Why do that when I have book two to read?! ;)

I have to say I absolutely loved this FF. I loved how you even made a A/N at the beginning letting us know where in the time like we are because I've been having so many problems with that reading other GH FF. I also loved your interpretation of everyone and found them to be very in character in my opinion. I also love how you didn't force any ships even if you hinted at it, it was all very subtle and very wonderful. Lastly I wanted to complement you on your horror. Often I find people trying to be extremely graphic but when they write it everything is just super cheesy but this one WAS NOT and I couldn't get enough of it. You made it all really realistic and plausible over all it was amazing and easy to read. Thank you so much and I can't wait to read your sequel.

She snapped...

re: your author's note - I think you've done a good job with personalities from the anime so far.

Really, everyone always gives Naru a hard time for being an ass. And yet Mai really does need to be kept on one of those child leash things. If Naru's fatal flaw is arrogant narcissism, then Mai's is arrogant stubbornness. Don't get me wrong, I like the character of Mai, but half the time I think she deserves to die because fic writers continue to write her doing stupid things that make no logical sense.

I ready enjoyed this story it has the right amount of horror but it the but romance isn't quit there yet. I'll be reading the doll house next.
Until next time ruby-marie94

This reminds me of a super morbid version of clue...I LOVE IT!

love it

Okay, I loved this story, even though it gave me the heebie-jeebies, but what's this business of TBC!?

Kyaaaa!
My favourite chapter!