| Reviews for Love For the Waters |
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   The Little Chibi chapter 20 . 1/18/2014 This story was fluffier than a rainbow-pooping unicorn. And it had a happy ending! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/16/2013 Aw, I wanted Tino in a dress. |
| Rose Bloodwater chapter 2 . 9/1/2013 For some odd reason in chapter one when Tino was telling Berwald about having to prove this thing called love existed, the Fin reminded me of Zim. Idk why. Oh well. I'm enjoy this story so far though. |
| Meikakuna chapter 20 . 8/22/2013 Good ending. |
| Meikakuna chapter 19 . 8/22/2013 While it would be nice if Berwald showed more flaws rather than be a perfect character, I do like the climax of this story. Good job! |
| Meikakuna chapter 4 . 8/20/2013 As I said in the last review, I like the characters, but I feel like Tino and Berwald gaining feelings for each other was too rushed. It would have been nice if you wrote more moments between them before they gained feelings for each other. Good job overall. I love Elizabeta in this story. |
| Meikakuna chapter 3 . 8/20/2013 I like the story so far, but you should have showed Arthur trying to reveal Finland's mermaid form instead of telling us that he is. This would have been more effective and would have felt less rushed. I like the characters and the mermaid lore but perhaps you shouldn't have exaggerated the way Berwald talks. Other than that, great fanfic so far! |
| Atlantis chapter 20 . 4/17/2013 (Penname not due to the subject of the fanfiction) I liked it, but the chapters were short and the whole overall story was a bit rushed. And just a rule of thumb: if the number being written is a single digit, write it out. 10 and over can be numbers. |
| Major chapter 20 . 1/25/2013 Poor Erik but the story was good. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/19/2013 is that it please dont say yes. also your mean to arthur but oh well its fuuny. loved the part when ah... i cant remember his name gott ah the lower class merman i loved it when he jumped out of the water. Black Kaitou |
| Den-Lille-Prins chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 Its a very cute story! I like it very much, but I would have liked a bit more kisses and such |
| NOMNOMBUNNYWILLEATYOURSOUL chapter 20 . 1/7/2013 awww cute altho i kinda feal sorry for artie |
| Ber-Ber chapter 19 . 11/25/2012 Fuck arthur. XDDDD |
| An.B chapter 19 . 11/24/2012 It would indeed be nice with an additional chapter or two, mainly because I didn't quite understand Arthur's motivation to prove mermaids exist - just *why*?, and some sort of rounding-off chapter would have been nice to tie together everything. Here it seems a bit cut off. |
| LadyLeelee87 chapter 19 . 11/23/2012 aww so cute |
