This was defiantly worth the wait!
FIVE STARS!

I liked your story for one reason and one reason only.

The world needs more Metal Slug fanfics.

Hell, the world needs more Metal Slug games!

Until SNK PLAYMORE announces that the franchise is dead, I'll continue supporting it in any way I can.

However, I do have one bit of criticism.

When reading stories, many people don't like a wall of text like it was shown in the second paragraph. For me, it doesn't bother me as much but because of the nature of a wall of text, I get lost reading it unless I zoom in the text, which people should not do to enjoy a story.

So in the next chapter, please try to avoid having a wall of text.

Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon.