Awesome story.
I think you should do a bit more explaining of Thomas's friends because all you gave us were thier names.
Also, if the ponies are in Earth (Guessing that the girl on the phone was Twilight) I bet Lisa and Mathew are gonna get visitors too but what about the two pony's left over?
4 friends, 6 ponies.
Either I'm bad at math or you have more people to introduced.
This is starting to get good so keep up the good work!
Thumbs up and bro-hoof!

Not bad, not bad at all; the protagonist doesn't come off nearly as pretentious as most do on this site keep going and be careful what you make him say and/or do.

Your welcome and *brohoof* /). This is a good start...poor guy...thumbs up so far.