Sorry for your loss...:(...this story was nice. Very sweet and sad...

Hmmmm... needs moar PinkieShy

Short, yet sweet. Dash's sudden realization in the end made me smile, as did the fact that Fluttershy watched her friend from heaven. I think you did a good job on it, but the events felt a bit rushed. It just seemed like a quick transition from mourning Dash to happy Dash. Nevertheless, I found myself enjoying your story. I am sorry for your loss.

Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX