I like it, keep on writing :)

Your writting is great, i loved it. Please update soon.

Your writing is truly amazing. I love this type of style. Delving into actions and thoughts rather than dialogue. It's beautiful. And your use of metaphors is both poetic and enviable. I really wish I could write this well.
Aside from that, I'm eager for the relationship between Asami and Iroh to uncoil.
I hope you find time to update soon! ]

Wow. You're descriptions are amazing and the way you delve so DEEP into the characters emotions and they're so intune and... It's just incredible.

SNO.

I'm reviewing (Again!) because I heard somewhere that authors don't write new chapters unless they get enough reviews. To which I seriously panicked! So here I am reviewing. XD Gosh, we need writers like you to publish stuff. You're ten times better than a whole lot of writers that have already published books, and the public is EATING IT UP. I KNEW there was something better, because if I could outwrite these people (I mean, for crying OUT LOUD! But I don't know if that's just my opinion or if I actually am better... lol). Point is, I wish there were published fiction stories with writing like yours. ;)
KEEP UPDATING! And I don't mind if it's late, as long as you get around to it. :D

This was wonderful to read - your writing is beautiful and you have a lot of talent.

Oh my gosh. YEAH this needs more reviews! It's amazing, maybe I can find some more reviewers. ;)

This is very, very good, and I have no constructive criticism whatsoever. :-o

I love how you characterize Asami. It's in-character, and you also add more depth to her than the show did.

I hope you continue this! You definitely deserve more reviews. :-)