This is good

awww. i hope xiaoyu gets her kiss soon. this is very cute, it would be nice if you could write another one like this

I thought it was quite nice, and I enjoyed it!

Awwww good story! I actually feel sorry for Xiao. She wants Jin to realise that he made the promise to Xiao about protection. And here he is, threatening Xiaoyu in a deathly say. Mad man... But, keep up the good work!:)