Bell'inizio

Como me encanta este fic XD (no está terminado ¿o si ? ) tetsuo es un gran maestro y naru persiguiendo a gaara es tan posible XD jajaja

I really like this version of the story too. Any chance you'll come back to it?

I really wish that this wasn't discontinued T.T It was so good! I love how you developed the characters and gave an interwoven plot that included several details and point of views. I hope that inspiration hits you at some point. If not, it was a great read while it lasted :D

I think that this is one of the very VERY few times that I'm applauding Danzo lol

...Utatana Koharu, what are you doing? but then again, I'm not exactly sure what could help Sasuke at the moment, considering he refuses to listen to anyone and any attempt to force seems to only make him feel worse -.- at least Naruto gets a chance at the chunin exams, O hope the group marriage team doesn't hinder his chances toooo much . and I hope he doesn't get himself into trouble trying to befriend Gaara .

I wish you still updated this story

Flopsy the Ninja Rabbit? I can't stop laughing at the image.

Sakura's dad needs to slap his wife upside the head and explain things to her in no uncertain terms. Barring that, a good spanking is in order followed by a stern lecture about pissing off the Ninja Boogy Man.

If all else fails, he may just have to divorce her and let her fend for herself.

you know it's a good fanfic if the writer can make you like the elder council.

so, I had avoided your first try au for a while and I have only now started to realize how much I'd been missing out on. this is exceedingly well-written, engaging, and enjoyable. thank you so much for writing!

I have a new appreciation for Shin now, holy hell that was great.

S.O.B?

Is there ever a chance of first try being continued?

Maybe once they've got enough of a basic shoved into their heads, Naruto can help upping their training? Target practice equals dodging practice! Depending what they're doing it might not be much of a challenge for him, but that's what creative instructions and compound training are for.