Reviews for Battousais Bride |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You finally updated. But i would like to know more about Tomoes appearance in the story. I guess i will have to wait for the next chapters. See you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() first I must ask is English your first language ? if the answer is no ,might I suggest that you try getting a beta reader to go over your chapters first so they can help you with spelling mistakes ? other then the spelling mistakes and gramatical errors you are doing a great job . |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Please update ... |
![]() ![]() ...Michi did not expect this... Toodles!~ |
![]() ![]() (**) POOR KAORU~SAN! MICHI~SENPAI FEELS SORRY FOR HER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() better, still keep an eye on your spelling. good job though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm finally caught up. It's very good, watch your spelling errors and slow down a bit. Double check the spelling, otherwise very good. Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() Perfect! |
![]() ![]() I love you so much. You make me happy everytime you update. |
![]() ![]() Great update. Please continue soon. I love this story! |
![]() ![]() I love you. I love you. You are an amazing author! |
![]() ![]() Wow, thanks for continuing the story. |
![]() ![]() Oh,so beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating. You may need to do grammar and spell check as it the sentence structure gets confusing. I feel like it the writing seems half hearted. Anyway, I love this story, and will continue to read and support. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story again really soon ! |