Reviews for The Forbidden Love |
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Violet chapter 5 . 6/12/2018 I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! |
Titania1796 chapter 5 . 9/15/2017 El fic esta fantastico enrredado pero fantastico |
XZanayu chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 Great story so far. Please continue! |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/4/2014 I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ |
Lady Michiko chapter 5 . 5/18/2013 plscontinue |
XZanayu chapter 5 . 1/2/2013 Great story so far. Awaiting the next chapter! |
Man-Suz-She chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 Is this the long version of the summary? The sentences don't seem to be complete thoughts and is a little on the hard-to-read-without-peicing-in-things side. I don't mean to be a grammar Nazi but I think a Beta would help find and correct errors like spelling and completing the sentences before actually posting the chapters. I'm sure you've got reviews like this before but I think it would help your story. It is a fairly good idea and plot you have going on but if readers can't tell what you're trying to say they will stop reading the story. I hope you fix the errors in future chapters or for future FanFictions, Man-Suz-She. |
flowersconchinola chapter 5 . 10/13/2012 Please update soon! |
Kathalla chapter 5 . 9/13/2012 I very much like this story and I hope you update soon! |
dizzydani777 chapter 5 . 8/19/2012 Awesome Family! |
dizzydani777 chapter 3 . 8/19/2012 very interesting |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012 meee want ! |
the allyson wonderland chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 Omg great story but UPDATE IT SOON |
Clove15 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 Update soon |
myheartunlock-special spark chapter 1 . 7/1/2012 I love the prologue it explained the right things and got me excited about the rest of the story can't wait for the next chapter From, Cherry-chan |