why did you drop your story it's really good

loving the story! hope harry will be are right... update soon!

You've really written James and Sirius as completely unlikable, no redeeming qualities at all, good work. Someone needs to have Albus examined for going round the bend or senile or something. hope they realise what Dumbledore did and can get him in trouble for having a student dose another student with a potion

Love it. Update soon.

Well, it should be too hard to deduce how Harry was administered that potion. Proof however might be difficult. Hopefully Ron will suffer some consequences even if they aren't for the reason of poisoning another student.

Your story is really amazing. I love it and I hope you didn’t discontinue it because I would really love to find out what happens next. :)

It is a joy to see this story resumed. Hopefully 'Nothing Else Matters' and 'The Last in Line' will also be continued as I also miss reading more in all three tales.
Bunyip

Rereading this and still enjoying it - i just would like James and Sirius being more facetious, as they are pictured they are just stupid idiots. There has to be some good points for James or Lily wouldn’t have married him - as he is shown here he isn’t as good an actor as he would have to be to totally fool her.
That’s not a rant about James over Severus - as long as it is well done i have no preferences about who Lily is with. The Severus in this story is definitely a better father for Harry and a better husband for Lily than James is.

Am i right when i guess that Dumbledore suffers from a mental illness? If he isn’t i would prefer him to actually have reasons for what he does and not just joining the all Slytherin are evil, there was never a Gryffindor going dark band waggon. While different from the canon Dumbledore he seems to be about as much an idiot as the J and S auror dreamteam.

I hope the muse keeps doing her job und you can update more often. I am curious if Peter can make any of his plans come true and if Dumbledore will die from a shock about an evil Gryff, when it comes to light who is the evil mastermind behind the dark activities.

I cant wait to read more. I would love to see them find godrics portrait and him rip potter and black a new one because I dont think he would approve

Hey , can you please tell if you are writing a sequel , I can't wait to read what happens after chapter 30 .

Hola, antes que nada permíteme felicitarte, tu historia es hermosa, me encanta, severus me encanta y la personalidad de Lily está genial.
Ahora por favor no dejéis de actualizar. Estoy intrigada.

A "vial full"; that's got to be more than "10 drops"!
Shoot, all I'd need to do to throw up is be asked to read Rowling's over-priced, over-hyped cross-over *Fanfiction* again! ;D

I notice that you take large breaks between postings for this story; I figure that after having to get in the mindset to write JP, SB, and the MOB this unbelievably stupid, petty, and malicious that you must need to go and bleach your brain! Lol! I know I did after reading Rowling's tripe the one and only time I did!
I re-read my old, beloved children's books and stories all the time; just for the lovely nostalgic feeling of revisiting 'old friends', so don't think that I'm down on Rowling's books because I'm 'old' (58, now) and can't find the 'childish enjoyment' of the books! No! I dislike her works because #1, they're either *not* written for 'children' or they're written with such a 'slant' on the world as to convince children that black is white and that HER versions of 'psycho-babble' are *real* behavioral studies (having characters [the author] *say* they're against bigotry, racism, elitism, specieism, etc., and then have those same characters turn around and ACT the opposite or as in Fumbleduck's case, state that his "hands are tied"! He had the power to cause Harry to be whisked away from Godric's Hollow before his parents' bodies were cool and taken to Privet Drive, OVER the objection of one Godparent and while the other Godparent [Alice] was well and able to fulfill her duties, up to 5 days after the attack on the Potters! But Rowling then turns around and acts like the MOF is 'powerless' to prevent the odious, Nazi-like laws against werewolves from being enacted!)! And #2 because I've found numerous instances of Rowling actively *stealing* characters, plots, and whole scenes from other Fantasy books and stories and other children's literature!
I don't necessarily object to the 'borrowing' from other sources, but she managed to *warp* the ideologies and characterizations and return them slightly 'tainted'.
Anyhoo, I'm pleased to see you back at it and I hope that you're well and keeping safe!
Thank you so much for coming back!
Take care!
MelJ :D

Sooo happpy this is updated

Oh... I love this story! I hope Lily and Sev kick dumbles arse! I can’t wait for the next update! I so hope it’s soon!

cool update soon please thank you