You should've had him wear blacks mask from DC, I just it would've been much cooler tho. Stiil ill imagine that he does have it.

Masterpiece!

Great storyline looking forward too next chapters

please more

queroel capitulo 48 49 y 50 para saber que pasara con naruto

Why does he get involved in everything that is? What does he care about Sasuke? Why does everyone want to push friendship between Sasuke and Naruto? Here he is generally from another village, but you still want to somehow make friends between Naruto and Sasuke.

Please write more I would like to see what happens next

...you had Jiraiya teach him the rasengan after he talks to him once...and while he still believes him to be a KUMO GENIN...because he "has a hunch he can trust the kid with it"? Just...just stop. Please.

Oh my god how do you get THIS FAR in a story and still have literally no plot progression? When is Naruto being from Konoha, the kyuubi jinchuuriki, his parents being so important to konoha, or any of the other countless issues that actually matter; going to be addressed? Why the fuck didnt you just make this a story where he was BORN IN KUMO, because you make absolutely everything about your "premise" completely irrelevant.

Okay yeah this is painful to read, the 3rd is already portrayed as a fucking idiot with an IQ of 60.

I'm amazed Excalibur exist here too

I didn't know Europe existed in the elemental nations

A bow for a ninja

But yeahh naruto with a bikini hinata is best thing hahahhahha...

man i don't know i love your stories but monologue between naruto and neji sometimes makes mee cringe a bit. ...Hope you can update this fic since i know you still well activee...