The beginning was honestly a little cringe inducing but it got a lot better towards the end until it ended on that cliff hanger hopefully this story will be picked back up soon cause it was actually getting very interesting

Sorry I couldn't even digest the edginess in the first chapter... This is just bad... And I mean Shadow with a submachine gun bad

I’m not the only one sitting here wondering if the multiple personality disorder is necessary for the story right?

I totally recommend angel of darkness for raven and servant of evil for zero

...you have been taking quite a few pages out of Teen Titans One of Four Elements haven't you friend.

Makes a fanfiction about joining the teen titans to battle evil immediately makes him a pussy lol " I will not use violence to solve my problems". Lol OK bud I'm sure all the do villains will let u talk and reason them into jail Smh.

This became shit. Thanks for the entertainment till now though was fun while it lasted...*sighs*

Loving the story so far and I love that Gurren Laggan quote you did! Perfect;)

I like it please continue

GOOD, ROBIN SHOULD FEEL SORRY! I hope you have a major league thrashing in store for him
because he deserves it.

*starts to tear up* Y-You've potentially saved Terra. *falls to knees* YEEEEE-EEEEEEES!

Oh, just have them kiss already.

I have a very bad feeling about Light's last words this chapter.

Might I suggest Blitz giving Slade the same treatment Eneru gave Cross in the This Bites! fanfic.
Trust me, it was not pretty.

Hey how does Slade know Sean's na- waaait a second. You said his last name is- then that means.
. . . . . YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! How does tha- I mean- WHAAAAAAT! This will be interesting.