Reviews for The Secret Of Chaos
EmmerzK chapter 11 . 10/27/2012
Ohhhhh a lil va-va-voom in da story Hehehehe Love the little play argument there! And I always died when Nico would speak in French and all the girls would go crazy Lol French is pretty sweet ;)

Aw bummer. Well all things must come to an end at some point! :) Glad you've written some epic stories! I shall certainly miss you! Check out some of my stories sometime, k? ;) Adios girlie!
Ravenclaw Heronstairs chapter 11 . 10/25/2012
Awww SO cute! Ali and Nico's flirtatiousness never gets old! :} I love them! I'm gonna miss them though! :( I'm going to miss you and your stories! Hopefully the sequel will be amazing and we'll all come back with more ideas! Haha I'm running low on inspiration too! :(

Great story! Seriously, one of my favs! Hope I'll get to hear from you again! :)

Btw, you should check out me and EmmerzK co-written story 'Diamond in the Rough' just sayin'...;)
Boba Addict chapter 10 . 10/17/2012
Okay, so I usually don't leave reviews because I'm a lazy bum, no matter how much I like the story. But screw that, I'm reviewing this one. X)

OMG OMG THIS IS AWESOME.

For some reason, I knew that Franco was the Director all along. I JUST KNEW.

OMGYAYNICOANDPEDROWONFIRSTPL ACEINTHECOMPETITION

Please hurry and update the epilogue! And out of curiosity, will Nico's parents show up again?
Ravenclaw Heronstairs chapter 10 . 9/20/2012
THEY WON! AWWW! Haha I'm so happy for them! Esp. Nico who wanted this so badly! I had reread because at first I thought the other girl won but then I realized it was for second place! Haha an awesome last chapter! :)

I also loved the sing along in the beginning! One of my fav songs being sung by the coolest group of birds ever! ;) Haha great job once again and cannot wait for the epilogue! :D
Taco2dayYay chapter 9 . 9/14/2012
You are the best writer on Fan Fiction to me! Based on the fact that your story's bio does not say "complete", I going to say that I'm really looking forward to reading what happens next. You are a very talented writer! Both this story and "Flying Home" are my favorite story's on fan fiction, and maybe even in the world. I know that sounds like a bit of an exaggeration, but it's actually quite true. I suppose I'm one of those secret hopeless romantics, though anyone who's ever met me would probably think the opposite since I never act like it. Another big reason I like this so much is because I'm a huge fan of Rio, in which Nico is my favorite character. My point being that this is defiantly one of my favorite stories of all time and I can't wait to read the rest!
EmmerzK chapter 9 . 9/5/2012
Bahaha I don't blame you one bit, sista! Haha I can imagine that a chapter this big w/ so many songs would be quite the royal pain in the butt.

Okay, I seriously had to reread the paragraph where Nico's leg flared up again bc I thought it snapped! Lol I was like 'NOOOOOOOOOOOO!' Haha But it's all good :) Hopefully it'll continue healing!

Ahhhhh Ali's performance was so sweet! Granted I need to listen to the song, but hey, it was really precious at any rate :} I wuv them so much!

Nico & Pedro's performance was fabulous! I hope they win! Ah you must update again soon! :D Well done girlie!
Givala chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
Forever Unstoppable is such a beautiful song... :')
Ravenclaw Heronstairs chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
Woo! This was SOOOOO INSANELY AWESOME! Haha

I love the fact that Ali dedicated a song to Nico! SO CUTE! :D

Ali knew she was about to spill, and she was finding it increasingly hard not to do so. There was only one thing to do that could distract him, and herself for that matter. She leaned forward and quickly pressed her beak against his, wrapping both wings around his neck and almost giggling when she felt his body stiffen in surprise.-Ahhh I just love them! XD

NICO AND PEDRO'S PERFORMANCE WAS DA BOMB! No joke. It was great. They should SO win but it would also be very surprising if they didn't win...I guess we'll just have to see!

Hahaha I love how Nico almost collapses in the end because of his leg and everyone is staring at him in concern while he's just laughing! XD Hahahah

GREAT JOB with the performances and the chapter! Now let's see who wins! :)
krystalking chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
I have two new songs, both I would recommend, as their excellent!
Dreams don't turn to dust by owl city
tidal wave by owl city
The chapter itself, I loved it, I can sympathize with Nico about getting no sleep and having a big performance or something similar the next day.
EmmerzK chapter 8 . 8/22/2012
Miyoko taking over was awesome! Loved that! I almost had the exact image of Nico's fright when she lashed out at him bc she was so GRRR Lol Great job there!

Oh gosh, gotta say that whatever Tia first whispered to Ali was probably REALLY dirty, right? Lol I found the part rather humorous though ;) hehe

Oh, and Nico & Ali? :) Eep! Love 'em so much! :D Just tooo cute! I'm kinda excited to find out what Ally's gonna do to make up for her mistakes ;) Hehehehehe

Nico freaking out? Awesome ;) Lol I'm curious to find out what he and Pedro are going to change up last minute. AND COSETTE IS BACK! HOORAY! 8D I love her! :D

Rly excited for the coming competition! :D Update again soon amiga!
Ravenclaw Heronstairs chapter 8 . 8/21/2012
Aww YES! You had NO idea how insanely happy I was to see you update! :D

"So basically, if no one takes over, and takes over soon, we are well and truly screwed?" Nico confirmed with Shanti, a small Leiothrix bird from India. She was a tiny green bird, with bright yellow and black tips on her wings and a yellow chest. Soft spoken and shy, she wasn't exactly ideal to lead a company as vast as this and organise the hundreds of workers and performers, but she was the only one with enough organisational skill and knowledge of the business.

One thing she did lack however, was confidence and voice.-That'd probably be me! Hahaha I like Shanti, she's cool! :D

"Angelique, right?" he asked, a small smile on his beak. She had saved his life after all.

"Um, yeah, look, I just want to tell you how sorry I am. Honestly I didn't want to hurt you, but he paid me and I needed what he had to offer. I'm sorry," she looked up, shameful blue eyes connecting with his forgiving brown ones.

"I think you more than made up for that," Nico grinned, "I mean, I'd probably be dead by this point if you hadn't come along,"

Angelique gave a small smile, "even so," she said softly, "I'm dropping out, I'm going home," she laughed a little, short and bitter, "where I can't cause any more damage."

"What was he paying you with anyway?" Nico had to ask. What could she be so desperate for that she was willing to do so much just to get a hold of it?

"Medicine," the dark bird said simply with a small shrug, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world, "it's a rare plant, and at the moment, the only hope for saving my son."-I'm glad she came to apologize again! :) That was nice! But what happened to her son? Wait, she has a SON? Hm, I'm curious about this girl now! Hahaha

"Actually," another voice came from the doorway of the dressing room, both heads snapping in the direction of the door, beaks dropping open, "I'm inclined to agree with Nico."

Nico stared at the figure, completely frozen with shock, though a wide grin was quickly growing on his beak.

"Cosette!" he laughed, darting into her open wings the second she offered the invitation, wrapping his wings around the older bird tightly.-YAY! Cosette's back! Made my day 10000 times better! XD

"I think you have to do something he wouldn't expect. Something you've never really done before. Maybe even something you don't feel all that comfortable doing," there was another moment of silence as the pair thought it over, "oh, how about this?" Tia suddenly exclaimed, before leaning over and whispering in her best friend's ear.

"Tia!" Ali cried after a few seconds, reaching up to slap the giggling bird around the back of the head, the canary blushing madly under her feathers, "seriously?" She rubbed her eyes with one wing, "sometimes I wonder what is going through that head of yours."

"I'll take that as a no?"

"Yes that's a no!" Ali near yelled, causing a few birds to glance in their direction.-Hm...I wonder what Tia was thinking...XD

"You know something?"

Ali's head snapped up at the sound of Nico's voice. An action she just knew Tia was smirking at. Standing in front of the crowed cushion, wings crossed and a laughing grin on his beak was Nico, Pedro and Cosette standing either side, both smirking.

"This group is one tent away from being a full blown circus, I swear."-Hahahaa i love it! Everyone is so funny! XD It's great!

Ooooh performance! I'm SO excited for that! Please update again soon! :D
Herobrine chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
This is excellent, I read both this and new life, I quite like them both. I Hope Nico and Pedro win!
I can only recommend one song: viva la Vida by coldplay, its perfect!
krystalking chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
I have a moderately long list, some of them don't fit much, some fit in an odd way, and others maybe shouldn't be on this list.
Telling the world- Taio cruz AKA the Rio theme.
Dream on- Areosmith
Every time we touch- Cascanda (I really recommend this one.)
Let me take you to Rio (I can't remember the author, but this one fits in an odd fashion.)
Globus- Preliator (I really don't recommend this one, it has a choir backup, is done in Latin, and just isn't very good outside of fantasy.)
High voltage- Can't remember Author
Bad to the Bone- Can't remember Author
As for the chapter itself, I quite liked this one, it has to be your best so far, keep up the good work!
EmmerzK chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
Song Suggestion! Turn Up The Music by Chris Brown! It's FABULOUS! You have to use that one! :) Or, DJ Got Us Falling In Love Again by Usher; it's a little more sensual in a few parts sadly (in my opinion) but it fits for the style of Nico & Pedro ;) Haha

Okay, this chapter was AWESOME! Angelique switching sides was perfect & also how she gathered the troops to overthrow Franco! Wonderful!

I almost thought Nico was gonna get legit hurt there! Seriously, I thought he was gonna get sliced open! Thankfully not so he can still perform! Haha

Ali's love spiel! Adorable! :) 3 Love them so much! ANd the interruption of their precious kiss again Haha Of course ;) They'll make up for it later, I just know it Hehehehehe!

Great job girlie! So I assume next chapter will be the final? Or no? If not, that would be grrrrrrrreat! Lol Anyway, update again soon! :D
Ravenclaw Heronstairs chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
Awww! YAY! I'm so overjoyed right now! They're back together! I knew you couldn't keep them apart! They're too cute for that nonsense!

I knew Franco was bad! Grrrrrrr! BUT he's been overthrown as Nico puts it! :D

Gah! I'm so excited for the competition! It's gonna be great!

Hmm songs? Let's see...

Tonight Tonight By Hot Chelle Rae.

More by Usher (that one's used a lot though)

Dynamite by Taio Cruz

Let it Rock by Kevin Rudolf ft lil Wayne.

Dj got us fallin' in Love by Usher

Glad you Came by The Wanted

It Girl by Jason Derulo? lol

Lol I'll see what you think of those so far and I'll letcha know if I think of any more! :)
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