interesting...

I actually didn't know what kohl was until I looked it up. I'm going to be using that term from now on as writing anything to do with Cyclonis's makeup was always awkward for me for some reason.

The story is pretty much perfect: very funny, and extremely in-character. It's basically a ten.

I can't believe I didn't add you to that author alert thing before now. You make good stuff.

Oh, I loved this! It was just funny enought to cause a few giggles, and it was So like Cyclonis!

Nice story! If you fancy a challenge why don't you try a fic about Dark Ace getting the same cold as MC? It must be even more embarrassing if you lose a fight due to a sneezing fit XD