sorry...didn't notice any differences between them...

OMG! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I. KNEW. IT! I knew they were supposed to kiss...if only that was in the real game...

hahahahahahah great

Troolololooloolololololololloooooololololollolololololololololololololololollolololololololloloolloolollololololololololoolololo. By the way, cute story

I liked it better the second time, but that's just me. SS Zelink is cute!

Awe cute story but why is it posted twice?

I have to say- The second one was significantly better than the first, but they still share a common problem: Too many words. Or at least, that's what it feels like. i would have broken up the dialogue a little bit with more details. Sensory details are always good, but a few about the environment (weather, time of day, etc.) would have been nice. Make it so the readers can imagine themselves there.
That is the only issue I see. The dialogue and actions of the characters flow very naturally and the bit with Groose and his friends is very cute. in the meantime, I wish you many magical words in your writing. Take care.
-Magician Irono

I have to say, if it would of ended it like this, Nintendo would of made me wild. This was an awesome short story, and I enjoyed it. Im a romantic, I won't deny it! And it was put together very well. Only advice: Im not sure thats how the average dad would react that way when he sees his daughter making out. Then again, maybe not considering what just happened. Good job!

Lol i like Grooses buddies.

fluffy and cute :)

Adorable! You are an awesome writer! when I played the game and Link won the ceremony I was raging at the TV because they didn't kiss! LOL, but like I said, awesome adorable cute fic!

Hahaha! Cute story!

sweet (:

:)
Good story

HAAAAA I IT! :D