lovely idea :) Good job!

Very good, I like the characterization here.

beautiful :) It made me smile
great work!

One of my all-time favourites.
It's just so very, very Zoro (in my opinion, that is)

Beautiful!

I like the line about Luffy's smile in the beginning. It captures a very important part of Luffy's influence on people. Whenever Nami says that there's some dangerous island/weather somewhere, and Luffy says "Yosh let's explore" and the rest of the crew(especially Usopp) protest, but he just smiles and says "It'll be fun!", and they groan, but follow him on his bizarre adventures. xD

I also like the line about how Zoro recalls the tune from when he was delirious. (but there's a typo: it should be "remembers" not "remember")

Short, but sweet and very heart-felt. The parentheses were a little unclear at first, but with the last line, they made a lot of sense, which I think was the effect you were going for anyway.

Aww. I love how you've explained Zoro's reactions to Usopp's apology and Brook's music. He really does seem to smile more when Luffy is truely happy.
And while it looks like the first mate doesn't care much about anything, this is a really good insight as to why he continues to follow the lovable idiot he calls 'captain'.
Love this!

Aaw, this was great! :D This was well-written and so poetic- Especially the last line, loved it! And it is so true, too

Keep up the great work ;D