It may be because I literally have no expectations for anything, but I honestly can’t find anything wrong with this. Although you might have repeated “Pop-Tarts” so many times that they don’t look like real words anymore.

I think it’s pretty good. Better than what I write - not that I do, it’s just wishful thinking.

This story is awesome! I love that Tony’s mind is hard to read because of how smart it is!

yeah this chapter was not as good as the first, will you be making more chapters.
i want to read more of tony and xavier toger and i wonder how mentali strong stark is how much can he lift and how many things he can juggel.
from a fan, i love tony stark hes my favorite character in avengers, and as ironman.
have a nice day.
:D

i like the second scene

i need more

Lovely story so far! I haven't read the whole chapter yet but I wanted to point out something. I think only Girl Scouts sell cookies. Not Boy Scouts

Wise decision

I have to say, I am really enjoying your series so far. Its a rather intruiguing concept that I had yet to come across, and one I find rather entertaining. Keep up the amazing work!

Ps. I rather prefer the other Xavier scene, the one in the first chapter. Whilst I admit it didn't flow all that well, it was highly entertaining and did caprure Tony's penchant for sidetracking.

Love this series! Love mutant Tony! I wonder what other powers Tony will have! Can't wait to read more! And I enjoyed when Charles came in.

compared to the first scene, yes... train wreck...

In front of the bots?!

Wow, your story made me want to actually see a one-on-one between Tony and Xavier! I'm sure it would be super inetresting

*snickering* Well, I like it, but I'll admit the scene that actually went into the story is better.

lol nice

I was wondering if you could post this series again but just take out the slash parts because I love everything in the first one until the end so I would love to keep reading but I don't want to read those parts. That would be great if you could but I understand that its probobly a lot of work so that alright. Please PM me back if you do. Thanks!