omg i cried the moment i got to the die alone part. great job author! dont need my heart anymore too huh

Wow...this is amazing and sad and so good and oH- THE FEELS! yes I did cry. A lot, actually. You did an excellent job writing this and what I liked most about it is when Percy said (also the point where the tears started flowing) that he would die alone. I don't think that if Annabeth ever really did break up with him then Percy would literally do what he just did. I don't think he would even try to find love again because he knows that the only love he would ever want/need, is Annabeth! He fell into flippin TARTARUS just to be with her! There's no doubt in my mind that would ever get over her

wHAT JUST HAPPENNED. You sort of lost me there, like, Annabeth broke up with him and then came back and apologized? What was that all about? But besides my confusion, the whole thing was pretty darn awesome.

I'm reading this on public transport and now I'm trying to stop the choking noises and everyone's looking at me... They do not know I have died at the hands of a sad sad fanfiction
The mortals do not know how much pain this is causing me.

You broke me! :'(

Why do you do this ;-;?
I cried. Period.
It was so well written.

So touching! I started crying half way through! You should write more fanfics like these.

Very touching , one of the very few stories that can make me cry. Great work :)

I cried. That's a huge acomplishment. Other than death, (I have experienced this many times with people very close to me) nothing can make me cry. Except this. You are awesome.

write more stories soon!

how-
why-
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oh, i just can't anymore

Wow awesome takent dude like way to go 123

Seriously...this is the second time I'm crying in half an hour. But I can't imagine them breaking up...I just can't.

I really like the touch of drama in there. Keep writing !

I cried but it was sooooo good! MAKE A SEQUEL!