Good God, my poor baby. Asami was too good for him, and Korra, I'm not gonna it took awhile for me to finally forgive for hurting her like that. It took three seasons for me to finally forgive Mako, even though I still don't like him

So sad... and it sounds right. Congratulations for this OS which breaks my heart. Asami didn't deserve this but I forgive Mako, he is only human.
Faves !

Loved your way of seing their relationship. You put word on what I felt about it. I found incredible that an anime could pictire such a character - complete, sensible - as Asami. I mean... Legnd of Korra is SO mature. It's just... It could be a serie, an actual, real serie. Would be better than most of what is broadcsted these years

So I loved, really loved the way you just made me live the Avatar universe from another perspective.

Thanks again !

And I loved your last sentence. It's as much pessimistic as full of hope. It's not because there are no fairytales that there are no love, and no feelings. It's just... reality, that comes back, boomerang, and punches her in the face.
But there will Iroh to make her believe again in love, instead of fairytales.

That was so depressing, but very well-written. Poor Asami! :( Just goes to show that love sucks ...

Mako's an a$$, but as many people have stated, that's only twelve episodes. Plus, the producers were only GIVEN twelve episodes, with no idea if there'd be future seasons. They needed to pack as much as they could there.

Awesome one-shot, as always I'm drawing a bunch, but writing little. :(

Damn I feel even more guilty about what happen to Asami

Ugh! Asami bb! You'll be alright! This is lovely. More please! :)