That was really well written. Heartbreaking though. I'm glad it wasn't in the story because it really broke my heart.

Your story is very good but it's a little sad too. I always imagined that Reggie would die and come back to life in the end. I always intended on keeping her alive no matter what. You see by keeping her alive, more drama and adventure is later to come .

I love your writing. You could mistake it for the words of Simon Holt himself! I would love to read more of this. I can't let go of the world of vours, Reggie, and Aaron, and this makes up for the tragic end of the book series. Good job!

this i a pretty good one shot and the only one (sadly) of a series i really admire and liked a lot. :)
i feel that this story fits in perfectly the style of the trilogy, knowing the twisted ways Vours can turn you and your thinking into...
good job :)

WOAH. that was freaking awesome. there's only one story for the devouring, and to my luck, it is really really good. you wrote like they would in the books and made the characters say what they would have said. awesome job.