this is great

Oh no, I can already see nepeta and tavros's cold dead bodies. Update pls.

this is supposed to be a sol/oc fic but i cant help but ship T with Eridan like jesus fuck why do you do this to me

An amazing story this is! I was so interested that I binged it in a day. I laughed at almost everything (except the dark parts obviously.) And was really happy that I was alone during those times. Please keep going! This story is perfect in every way possible and I'm happy to have read it.

I really hope you don't give up on this story! And it's alright if you do, to be honest. Writing is pretty hard. But nonetheless, I'm still hoping you finish this or at the very least, give a short summary of what happens. :D I'm not usually into OC fics, either, so I find this one really good and this will forever be one of my favorites!

You! You are seriously an awesome writer! I finished reading this in two days! (three if you take in account it's nearly 2am right now) but damn! I usually don't give OC's a chance, but you've done a really good job at writing this! I can't wait to read more and I hope you continue this. From one writer to another, though, I know what it's like to not have the time to update so I hold no grudges. I haven't even written any on here, but you gave me inspiration. Awesome job, d00d!

Just mixed emotions for Gam right now like seriously. I wished he stayed with them, but overall I'm loving how the story is turning out.

Okay, so I stayed up til 1: 30, reading this and I want to officially tell you: youarefuckingawesomeihateyousomuchjustpostthenextchapteralready! Regaaaardless, I have a couple suggestions. One: I noticed you switch settings a lot without any separation (for example, you go from a conversation between Titaia and Tavros in one place to one between Sollux and Karkat in another without any pause) and it gets rather confusing. It can get very confusing if you read like I do and occasionally skip a line or two and suddenly it's a whole different group of people. Secondly: there's a couple minor grammar and spelling mistakes here and there which could stand to be fixed if only for clarity and ease of reading. If you are in need of an editor, I would be more than happy to help (send me a PM if you are interested. It's something I do a lot) Third: update faster. Everyone would be happier. Especially me. but seriously, I love the story and really want to see more. And this coming from someone who usually hates OC x canon char stories. But regardless, keep writing, have fun, and be awesome.

Omg nooooooo.

you need help writing pothead gamz. you straight up suck at it, no offense. just trufacts bro

do a lil bit of research on that self medication

I hope you continue this, it's amazing!

*squeals quietly for 2 minutes* Yay! You upd8ed! Welcome 8ack!1

One last thing I'd like to say, i'll end this with a screw you, but have a nice day.
Trust me that line was awesome. Never doubt

Welcome back, bruh.

i have read this over 5 freaking times now! plz upd8! this fic is seriously amazing!