I liked your story.

i love it!

Meh

Very nice. I know this is a bit old, but you're using my name! Please update again soon.

Ah! Sorry it took so long for me to get off my bum and review. This is getting sooo good! Are Amalie and Noelani EVER going to come PROPERLY face to face? ARGH! *rips out hair* And you used my word! "How tragic"! I'm braining washing you! MUAHAHAHA! Erm, I'm gonna stop now, I've gotta go read your other story. Keep writing!

this is really good keep it up

Overall it was a good story. A couple things I didn'y argee with you though. The main thing was I have always been told obiwan was in his early twenties in episode 1 but you have him younger than a 19 year old if I read that correct.

Are they sisters? Why were they separated?

i was a great story. I can not wait to read the sequel

Thank you all who reviewed! I swear, I'll update soon, just have to wait until the site's up again, and until i get back from Jr. Olympics, but that's not the point. Kaminari-chan! I'm hurt! This is NOT a self insertion fic. You baka-brain. Stay in the rehab center, because I know where you sleep Soy Bean.

You deleted my beautiful review! How could you? *sob sob* I held that review in the highest esteem, I LOVED that review. *sniff* Ah well, what's done is done. I've said it once (twice, actually, if you want to be technical) and I'll say it again: brilliant story. You said you wanted to know why? Good writing style, interesting story (even for a self insertion fic, which normally I cannot stand), ect. ect. Want to keep it good? I can't offer any feedback, just keep pluggin' away at whatever it is that you're doing. Seeya sometime, after I've been releashed from the rehab centre (brought on by the trauma of finals).

Hey this is really starting to heat up! Its cool that amalie found out about obi wan like that, but I wonder how she will feel when she realizes that his master qui gon died. and I am very interested to see the showdown between darth mauls daughter and obi wan! Cant wait! Keep up the great work!

Hey this chapter was really good. I like the connection to darth maul. I hope you keep up the idea that darth maul was killed by obi wan and that he killed qui gon. ah in anycase its still great. I like the idea of this jedi amalie and its cool the way you tied in her background to the rather earlier beginnings of qui gon's jedi career! keep up the great work!