This is hailarious like wtf this is amazing is a amazing giant shot post of hailarious doom

*clears throught* Whispers in your ear, Do you like older men?

I’m sooo confused

i love te story abd have for years. i was very excited to read this chapternd i really hope you keep going. this was here to give me a lugh even at my darkest days and i really appreciate it.

Ah fuck now I read in a lisp now because of fucking Apollo.

This is probably the best shitpost I’ve seen in years. I just can’t catch a break laughing man.

My god, this is GLORIOUS!

I love this, just wow.

Lol

This killed me XD

Wow, this is gold.

My god lmao, you have the craziest reviewers. Seriously, scrolled down some of them, and ofc there are the chill ones, but some are insanely rude. Really hope you didn't pay any attention to them.

That being said, in my personal opinion, this should 100% be rated M. The jokes started going to the deep end towards the beginning of the second book, and even though the "12 yr old reviewers" are probably not 12, I'm sure this fell into the hands of someone who was a teen and didn't want to read this sort of genre. It's also misleading because the jokes slowly and slowly get more and more inappropriate, so ppl who read the beginning won't necessarily enjoy the middle. Not because of the plot, but more because of the targeted audience.

Otherwise, your humor is quite funny. The large amount of mentions of rape really aren't my thing, but minus that, and the 4th wall breaking and the causal way certain recountings of the story come off as satire, I find great. Just the excess mention of sex and rape (without trigger warnings as well) when I wasn't expecting so much of it for a T-rated story really threw me off.

It's quite a bit darker and grittier these last two chapters. Still though, this story is gold

djdjd this is so messed up but it's so good

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!