| Reviews for Imbalance |
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   Afriendforyou chapter 1 . 5/27 pleeaaase continue the story! |
| Jokermask18 chapter 14 . 3/28/2016 Nice! |
| Alliriyan chapter 13 . 10/28/2014 N'awwwww And also, that social commentary season 2 needed. Awesome. Update. -poke- remember, I know where you live. |
| Alliriyan chapter 12 . 10/28/2014 Work that soapbox, Eman! I'm really enjoying the depth and thought in the characterisations. And some of the responses are very powerful - go Asami! |
| Alliriyan chapter 11 . 10/28/2014 That was a badass philosophical chapter :D |
| Alliriyan chapter 10 . 10/28/2014 Daayum girl! |
| Alliriyan chapter 9 . 10/28/2014 Your style is very atmospheric. |
| Alliriyan chapter 8 . 10/28/2014 Ooh, developments! And the long anticipated radio scene! |
| Alliriyan chapter 7 . 10/28/2014 : ) Words and stuff |
| Alliriyan chapter 6 . 10/28/2014 : ) |
| Alliriyan chapter 5 . 10/28/2014 Can't think of much to comment on whilst it's all canon retread, but it feels like it should you know? Like an episode with added detail. |
| Alliriyan chapter 4 . 10/28/2014 Great descriptions |
| Alliriyan chapter 3 . 10/28/2014 Bumpitty bump review count Good characterisation |
| Alliriyan chapter 2 . 10/28/2014 Nice : ) Good sense of time passing at the start |
| Alliriyan chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Hey chick Brilliant imagery and really strong sense of movement throughout. There's some typos and run on sentences, I can do beta reading for you if you like. (I recall us discussing 'tenure'? And everyone seems in character in such a short amount of time - tis good! |
