But... A single tibana has cartage is enough for hundreds of shots...

Ah man it's been awhile since I was last reading this story but I gotta say I am still quite enjoying this as I was back in 2015 After having recently replayed both KOTOR games, you're story truly stands out as you've done quite interesting job in expanding of this era's galaxy and the brutality of the war that it definitely really shows how things got to such a chaotic mess in the next 5 years afterwards, the new unique factors you've added like the new characters or new events or so on really only enhances that unique story feel the KOTOR games brought by expanding the imagination of this era 4,000 years ago. I really look forward into seeing how you're handle the other world questlines after doing quite the unique work on Dantooine and Tatooine XD

Characters feel quite fresh out, Kael I am quite curious to see how will he continue as he's coming to terms he's Revan as the more memories he'll experience, while he may say now he's changed but I think it's only matter of time before he's gonna be finding memories that'll remind him exactly why Revan took the decisions he made and those reasons stemmed from the brutality of the Mandalorian Wars as I'm definitely liking your buildup from Elena and Bastila's questions on this, Kael is definitely in for some major questions being asked of him and realizing more what he did as Darth Revan, especially if memories of his methods in breaking Jedi and his assassins will start to come back as well.

Mission oh man there is so much you really helped expand upon, horrible of things she had go through from her rough childhood, being abandoned, the near life threatening moments, and now a traumatizing experience by that demagolka Xor Fett *To think Boba and Jango Fett are descendants of men like that though does explain some things in SWTOR with Khomo Fett* Still I hope she'll emerge better from this and I do like there's a address to her safety by the others though I do feel there could be more display of her survival skills she's had to build over the years and what she could pick up more from the others but I overall have enjoyed the big expansion on her story and being adopted by Carth and Audrey has definitely been enjoyable to see. Very curious to see how her character will develop through now the Kashyyyk arc as I can only imagine how her friendship with Zaalbar will be tested through this one.

And as for the others man those have been great as well, Canderous as always has been a favorite and I really liked you've addressed factors of how he looks back to the Mandalorian Wars, while on one man he's still brutal and ruthless in ways that remind me heavily of Sandor Clegane, especially how he can be a asshole XD But there's still limits he won't accept, he accepts the realities of war but not accepting cowardly tactics against civilians or unnecessary cruelty as he displays with Cathar, the fact that female Mandalorian was his Niece definitely helps expands how he sees Honor as and his interactions with Juhani as I definitely like where the potential is going there for the two now that they've settled parts of their dark past, the scenes with Jena Farr as well were great as well and I look forward into seeing how Canderous Ordo will eventually go reuniting the Clans and probably recruiting new members, makes me actually wonder if he'll possibly encounter characters like Dorjander Kace or Rohlan Drye or Jaing that can influence his development? Up to you, just a thought since I liked you're mention of Zayne and Jarel, man that comic series brings much nostalgia, curious to see who his son is and more on Veela Ordo's character, getting a almost Lagertha vibe from the mentions of her XD

Will be interesting to see how will Elena and Bastila will overcome their struggles and oh boy poor Kael being slowly caught between a rivalry with these two :P, still quite the dark visions Bastila is experiencing there and her growing conflict with the Jedi Council, she is in ways trending along what brought Exar Kun to the dark side and I can imagine her jealousy is only gonna continue to grow with the more Kael/Elena's relationship develops, looking forward into seeing where you're take the three, I will honestly will not be surprised if Kreia may give Bastila a visit *Your scene of her meeting Elena definitely brought back the chills Kreia could just sent down one's spine* Still overall looking forward to what you're have in store for the three there.

All in all some very unique work you've done for the KOTOR storyline and I wish ya all of the best luck to your work on this XD If you were interested, I do have some possible suggestions if you're interested? Up to you, I understand if not, one was I have a OC you can have we can discuss on PM if you like but again I understand if not, only offering. Did also some video links I believe that may interest you, I'll leave them below with the words separated in order for it to be seen but if they don't work I'll leave the names with them.

But anyway, good luck and hope you stay safe out there, till the next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

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"Why this Sith Faction was the ONLY Thing Revan Truly Feared"

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"How Skilled was the Average Mandalorian Soldier? [Soldier Comparison]"

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"What is the Balance of the Force?"

What a dark chapter but what a great one also. I would be very surprised if the entire remaining crew makes it all the way to the Star Forge without a death or some trying to leave and go rogue. Audrey trying to drag Mission away from Revan seems like a likely option, forcing the teenage twi'lek to choose between her family in Carth and Audrey and her brother in Revan. Talk about drama.
Looking forward to that if it does happen and the rest of the story in general

Awesome chapter, looking forward to future updates

Hope you are safe as well. I'm an essential worker so still working hard as can be.
I'm so excited to read the chapter where Revan reveals himself to the crew. Once they get to hyperspace call the whole crew to the center operations area and have a tough conversation. I'm most interested in Audrey reaction and how Carth will react to it as well. Can't wait.

Glad to hear you are still healthy and writing. Hope to hear more from you soon

Good chapter

I’m glad to see the story continue and good luck on your exam! I also really liked the more nuanced and deeper motivations/feelings/reactions you have the characters, my favorite being Canderous

It's so good to see that despite the long wait between updates the story is not abandoned! The quality of chapters is certainly worth the wait. I have yet to read this chapter but definitely will as soon as I have time :)

Take care of yourself and good luck on your upcoming exam(s)! :)

I am one of the writers who has been forced not to write anymore. Only so much time in the day. Im glad you still do. I'll certainly be here in August for the next chapter. Good luck with your exams

Bastila in a moral quandary

Update pls

Well, I'm glad to see that what appears to be Revan not abandoning his friends to their fates. Didn't think he would, he just had quite a rough patch to get through. But I guess we'll see next chapter.

Addressing your authors note, I can understand taking flack for such a thing as the romance must be frustrating, for me this is the first time reading your story since 2014, but I stand by what I said in my review of chapter 23 back then, I personally actually really like Elena and would not at all mind if she is the one Revan reconnects with.

Hot damn this story is phenomenal! I swear I was only on chapter 20 a minute ago and now I’m all caught up, can’t wait for more keep up the great work!

Sure seems like Bastila is learning a lot about what the Force really is and what life really is about. Definitely proud of the character development