Reviews for Red Roses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story! It is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS REALLY CUTE AND A GOOD STORY SO FAR! Please continue it and keep up the good writing! |
![]() ![]() Funny but, inuyasha is a huge BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm. I want to know what happens but the pace is just too slow for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny author's note |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok I am interested. |
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![]() ![]() Hey. There is it over or r you just not going to post i would like to. know |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story, I like it. I'm glad for once someone gave poor Kouru someone. but one thing I noticed, in earlier chapters you used WASTE instead of WAIST. just so you know. good luck in your writing, and keep going :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's... quite incoherent. You should work on your flow and pacing a bit, making sure that you keep to the same tense and don't stumble so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After I read that I screamed into a pillow that smells like my friends dog. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I really wanna kno wats gonna happen! |