This is so good so far omg

I enjoyed this fic. You did a really authentic job of portraying the animalistic nature of the pack. The may have been born for this life, but that didn’t make it any easier for them. Great job!

Absolutely amazing writing I loved this story.

This story is pure gold. The way you wrote Jacob and Bella - so cute, believable, truly best friends. The super cool pack mind she got to share with him. I love it so much.

Beautiful writing, incredible plotting, devastating characters. Love this story so much I can't believe I'm only reading it now. Thank you for putting so much energy and brilliance into this. It's a real gift to the fandom and gives the amazing Jacob Black the respect and attention he deserves.

Oh this chapter is breathtaking... Perfection.

I love how you made Bella and Jakes relationship so much more important in this FanFic. It just adds that level of depth that other FanFics miss when they just have them meet randomly. Also having the story told from both POVs is also really fucking awesome because you don’t really have to guess how the other one is feeling at any time because that’s not what this story is about. Not anymore. We’ve made it past that part and now it’s just a matter of making it through everything together.
I do have to say, though. I was a little confused when the council randomly just started freaking out and you didn’t explain why. I had to read that paragraph, like, five times in order to finally get that they were freaking out over the eyes. Other than that, it’s perfect so far. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Thank you!

- A Crazy Person

P.S. I love how you made the craving possessiveness such a big part of this story. For one thing, it’s hot. And for another, you can really get how imprinting can be a blessing and a curse and the crazy, dark, realistic, and desperate angles you were looking for.

Really really loved this story! Especially your Jake and Bells! Thank you!

I wish I could finish this, but I've found myself bored of the story. I'm confused as to what the plot is in this book and what direction it's trying to take. Reading half a chapter to find that nothing has changed grinds my gears. seriously, Bellas had been in the bathroom contemplating the changes in her life and has done so since 6 or so chapters ago. I get it, there is a lot changes in her life, but it just drags and drags without actually making a point. By the time it does, I just dont care.

I seriously never read Jacob/Bella stories but this one was just tooooo good. You might have changed my mind on them. Anywho this story was absolutely awesome and intense and so freaking good. My heart pounded through each chapter and I really loved the pack/world building you did and the way you developed Bella and Jake's relationship from their bff days to their time as lovers. Amazing job as always. Love your writing :)

Ahhhhhh this was so intense! And dramatic! And stressful! And wonderful truly!

You are an amazing writer! I've read your Paul and Bella story as well, Be Like Water and it was amazing just like this one. Please write more Paul and Bella stories!

I love your writing so much ugh. And this chapter was too beautiful, yay Jake n' Bells being back together

This last section starting from Jake coming home was so beautifully written. I love your writing style so much and that was such a perfect example of how awesome it is wow

This was definitely one of the greats! This was soooooo good!