Reviews for Taken
ManonVarendaz chapter 12 . 5/28/2015
I really enjoy this story so far. So I will keep my eye on this to see where this is going. Please don't give up on it. Thank you for sharing your story
Xeny13 chapter 11 . 7/21/2014
I would like to see the next chapter
Greatings from Iceland
Guest chapter 11 . 7/18/2014
You are a really good writer! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 7/17/2014
This is really good, you should keep the story as it is right now, but i do advice you to make the chapters longer , they are way too short to be called chapter , I really like like this and you are a good writer
Guest chapter 10 . 7/17/2014
You need to introduce Avatar Aang and Appa.
Moon and Stars224 chapter 10 . 7/22/2013
Please update soon.
raidersfan777 chapter 10 . 7/16/2013
Sweet! Another chapter! thanks for updating I know you're going through a tough time so I understand if updates are a little slow take your time as long as you update it doesn't matter how long it takes see ya. ;)
Nikita chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Hey I'm new here and am just starting to get into the swing of things, first off - defiantly keep writing, you have a fantastic story going and I can't wait for the next update! Some of the stories here are awful but this one left me hanging! (Which is a really good thing!) I want to know more! (Zutara! - yay! ;)
If you want some constructive criticism the only thing I would add is to make the chapters longer - but other than that I absolutely LOVE it! ;)
If you ever get writers block again my suggestion to you is to listen to some music or surround yourself with something that lets you just relax and think (for me it's music but It could be drawing or bird watching - whatever floats ur boat!) I find that I come up with the most awesome stories when I do this and I probably end up going off into fantasy land in the process, but oh well!
Keep writing! - I'm waiting for the next update! ;)
Nikita ;D
raidersfan777 chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
I missed you! Wow! How long has it been jeez...I'm so glad your back but i am ashamed to tell you that I totally forgot about this story when I read the alert i didn't even know what this story was so I had to read the whole thing over again, good thing your chapters are short or it would've taken me forever to finish. And yes please make the chapters longer I... need... more update soon please. :)
WordsHaveMeaning chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
great story so far I feel that its lacking somehow... but I cant put me finger on it! zuko should say something unexpected (wink wink) and katara is all against it and zuko loses his temper but doesn't give up on his proposal
I love you story so far cant wait to read more!3 btw: can you make the chapters longer by any chance.. *shy face*
-WHM
Chickenita chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
Come on! Don't leave me hanging! This story is awesome!
raidersfan777 chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
Oh have the blue spirit save Katara that would be fun to read hehe hope you update. :)
SarahARivera chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
This is amazing story so far. Can't wait for more of it and to see how everything will play out. I love it! Please update soon. 3
Jasmine chapter 6 . 8/12/2012
Keep going! Don't stop! I like the story so far!
Xuerneas chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
Thanks for updating I like it so far.
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