A well written story. I love how the plot delves into multiple serious topics (mental illness, LGBTQ, etc). I burned through each chapter in a manner of hours. I wish we could see more development between Butch and Buttercup and perhaps the ruffs and puffs but never mind that, although I liked how the ending gave the readers a way to interpret it to their liking whilst giving somewhat a closure! A wonderful story, great job!

Omg I love this story so much! Happy that buttercup is finally happy again! So much raw emotion in this fic, I cried!D

Your description of a caffeine addiction is well done and the description of panic is unnervingly well written. I'm sitting here and reading this with sweaty hands, because I'm worried and nervous and just agghgghghhgghhh! My brain is whirring, trying to see if there is anything out of the ordinary with this story, and I can't find a thing (other than my dumb-ass reading this fic on a laptop). Always loved the idea of villains/enemies created to be equals to heroes and this fic makes it soo much better.
Your fellow Fiction and Fangirl,
Cinder Luna

I only recently starting reading PPG fics and have been binge-reading them since I found a really good one. This is one of the best out of the 12 that I have read today (NGL they are all blending together). It's coherent and well paragraphed, it's just a good effing fic.
I also hate that I see myself as Blossom. Blossom's nerdiness and Buttercup's flaming temper, that's me in a nutshell. Great job on this fic and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters! Needless to say, I am a fan.
Your fellow Fictioner and Fangirl,
Cinder Luna

This is one of the best ppg fics I’ve read!
After the first chapter I knew it was leading up to something great. The way you wrote each of the characters and how buttercups situation was effecting them was amazing.
I’m glad you took time to write this and I hope you continue with more stories!

The only thing I didn't love about this wonderful story was the end. Not because it was written badly or any criticism just that fact that it ended at all lol. I tried to click the next chapter button and the damn thing wouldn't work I'll have to check on that lol mlm I wish there was more who's jessanna how is butch comfy in the house are the rrb going to college are butch and buttercup together grrr I need to know what's next. Lol anyway Thanx for the ride thus far and please keep on writing

damn... pls tell me there is a happy ending
THIS IS JUST TOO MUCH
MY HEART..
BREAK..

Can't wait!

Will this continue? I need more! This is so good!

Woooow

Lol funny how 1 letter can change everything. I’ve been excited to see this play out it’s such an interesting take on HIM and with lobster of evil targeting buttercup specifically it makes a lot of sense outside of her overall stubbornness to lose she’s the one with the least mental fortitude. Blossom could deal and bubbles if more or less to bright for the darker nature the dreams need hell HIM could’ve been turned into a nice person spending too much time in her head lol. However by doing so he can still hit the other puffs forcing them to worry and cripple the physically strongest one of the bunch at the same time...pure genius...evil but genius lol

Who who who who I’m so anxious

Finally caught up and wow what a tale this is so much fun to read I’m definitely loving where it’s going and really loving the ride. Thanx for the ride thus far and please keep on writing

Has to pause just to say you got my blood pumping with this chapter the imagery was beautiful and vivid I felt that ball of emotion she felt and boy this was good thanx for the ride thus far and please keep on writing

I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to more :D