Reviews for The Last Attempt |
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![]() ![]() Oh, fucking bowl of shit, this is good |
![]() ![]() Check your He /she cuz I don think tony is a girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y'know there's already a movie vision of this story kind, in Iron Man 2 Tony has blood toxity fom the Arc reactor... Just sayin', but it's still a good fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, please continue really interesting |
![]() ![]() That was awesome 3 |
![]() ![]() You should send this to marvel and see if you can publish this as a book it's awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() You made Tricia evil? You meanie! Tricia is like Tony's aunt! He already has everything else taken away from him... Kidding, you're not a meanie, but still.. :P Sheesh, that was random, that was even more random then Rhona the little Goth girl trying to kill Tony and his friends, and the fact that she MADE her brother..At that point I started to wonder if that episode was Tony's wild imagination. XD |
![]() ![]() Hahaha that was an amazing story! Not what I was expecting at all. Bravo. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have only read three chapters and I'm amazed! Your writing is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know i just saw all episodes because i guess i had nothing else and wanted to see more pepperony too |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW! Not the ending already! *sniff* I PROMISED MYSELF I WOULDN'T CRY! *blows nose on tissue* What a great story, and a wonderful ending to boot! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well sad it's done but it was good:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED it more than i imagined i would! Sad that its done, but...everything has to end. LOVE it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O OOOH! That WAS a cliffhanger! Wow, how ironic! Tricia, a traitor! :D You really know how to give a story twists and turns! :D That was awesome! |