My suggestions/answers Demigod or huntress:Demigod. Name:Mia. Age:14. Gender:Female. Immortal parent:Poseidon Which Olympian will they fight:Ares Brief description of appearance:sea green eyes,long black hair,white,ripped jeans,camp top,sea green sweater and traners Brief description of personality:fun,serious at times,the best sawd fighter since Herculise and sister of Percy. Brief back story:she came to camp at the age of 5 she ran away at the age of 3-4 she got claimed in the dining povilion and she has a boyfriend called kalon Weapon of choice:A sawd called tidal wave

This is the best fanfic ever ur da best

This is really good well done ceap up the good work

So does that mean he never met Zoe?

I’m sure Percy will listen to Heracles..right?...RIGHT?!

Only 100 years? They waited a lot longer last time.

Percy married to Artemis? Percy as the king of the gods? Did not see those two things coming.
Oh no. Now the dark council will have a dark Nico, Thalia, and Percy! This is even worse than before!

I hope the other gods don’t come to rely on their future knowledge to much.

Hahaha all their reactions!

Time travel! Did not see that coming! Though given Percy is the god of time, I probably should have. Kind of wish the had had been able to stop by camp briefly first, if only to see everyone’s reactions to them becoming gods.

Wait wait wait! Holy sh*t! All the other Olympians are dead? What the Hades happened?! How?! Who?! Why?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Woah woah woah! That was an unexpected turn.

I think Percy and Thalia gave in a little quickly, but then they might have just been surprised that Zeus relented so easily. I really hope this leads to a closer friendship between them and Nico.

I’m glad the breakup was mutual. I like Percabeth as a couple in cannon, but there friendship is so strong that it always makes me a little sad in fan fics where they aren’t friends at least. I really like that Thalia and Nico are also having the god thing thrust upon them. Haven’t seen that in many other fics.
Overall a good chapter, just a few typos here and there.

I have a character for your story.
This character is a male son of Hades of about
19 years of age named Socrates, he is a fairly quiet person whose fatal flaw is a love of revenge he is a big reader,but can handle himself in battle,he hates bullys and is on occasion a bit rash. He has the ability to summon undead, hellhounds, and other underworld weapons he has twin Stygian iron rods a little over two feet in length and 3 inches in diameter tipped with silver with Greek writing on the silver tips these tips can deploy several different weapons including but not limited to an Axe,Mace, Claymore,and is 6'3 has shoulder length black hair he has pale skin but not to pale and is muscular but not to muscular and has a burn scar on his face from a dragon which murdered his mother and twin sister when he was 8 years old and was raised by his uncle Seca who taught him himself how to fight instead of sending him to camp because he was born in Sparta and was a clearsighted mortal who was slain in battle in a war between Sparta and Athens when Socrates was about 18, 1day after Seca sent him to camp Olympus on at the bequest of a letter sent by Socrates's grandfather