Reviews for lost and found |
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Meister1994 chapter 7 . 7/19 For me, I loved the Poseidon and Athena dating part. I just didn’t like that in Ch 4, Artemis just suddenly fell for him instead of it being slow burn. She had met him 2 times b4 then, and she suddenly loves him? I just wasn’t a huge fan. Change that bit and slightly improve the grammar and you’ll be good |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31 There is also another story from ansklusmos14 which has the same name |
Rebmul chapter 1 . 11/30/2018 Lots of missing words or weird sentences. |
Rainyll27 chapter 8 . 12/17/2015 One word. Cool |
Rainyll27 chapter 1 . 12/17/2015 Wow. Wow |
blackbeltgirl14 chapter 6 . 4/5/2015 Poseidon and Athena dating!? Where do you get these ideas from? Not that they're bad or anything, but seriously. |
blackbeltgirl14 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 So sad! Where did you get the idea of killing Annabeth off? That sounded totally harsh, but still. |
Fireguy892 chapter 1 . 11/25/2014 Good Story |
PaultheMalamute chapter 8 . 9/8/2013 Awesome. I liked it although I think they fell in love a bit quick. I mean it was quite sudden. I hate it when a couple get together at the end of the story but I also like a little build, so like in the middle of a story. But anyway it was still good and very enjoyable. I look forward to reading the Son of Neptune Pertemis which sounds great and interesting. |
Die Hard Fan PL chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Short but still amazing because of Percy and Artemis! Love it |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2013 go percy¡ |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/30/2013 Haha! Really really good so good I don't have the time to review and must rush to the sequel |
WalkingStranger99 chapter 6 . 2/15/2013 Gigady Gigady ? |
WalkingStranger99 chapter 5 . 2/15/2013 annabeth cheats on percy ? |
WalkingStranger99 chapter 3 . 2/15/2013 na its bob :D |