I liked the chapter!

Looooool "Archon Telbert, who has promised us that he will make sure that all civilians they rescue are treated in the same way they would treat us." this gave me a good laugh.

This was super neat. Thank you for writing!

Oh crap, I get the feeling that those Eldar are not what they seem to be...

BIBOTOT

Tau? Fluff says everyone, Eldar, Imperial, etc. considerd the Tau to be an extremely minor species. They have, what, thirty star systems compared to the Imperiums many millions (only like, one million habitable but many times that for resources). The only reason they are not simply a footnote in the game, if that, is because they're playable.

Really great story, can't wait to see when the tale of Nathaniel continues and where it will go. Fantastic

two words to sum it up:

Bad. Ass.

Good ending to a great series.

Great ending to a great story - its true that you have accomplished some amazing things in this story. I have not reviewed frequently but I feel as if I owe it to you to let you know that I have been a loyal reader and will continue to take great interest in any future stories you may write.

i feel so bad for nathaneal he cant ever be happy

Oh this is just getting better and better. The Old One seems a bit strange, though. Their goal is to create balance in the universe, which is the destruction of Chaos and Necron, but also harmony between Orks, Humans, Eldar, Tau and Tyranids. If one race is to be superior compared to all others, that balance would be lost. I dont think they would agree the Imperium going aroung butchering every other races and thrashing all their creations. Obviously, it requires all forces of Order, except Necron, to rule and govern the galaxy.

Good ol' Nate has a heart of ice, kinda upset he killed chun but then again it's probably for the best. Life and day of an inquisitor.

Fantastic. Loved every chapter keep up the great work

Wow, this looks to be a good fic!

IT'S RAINEN SIDEWAYS! I MEAN...SPACE MARINES!