I love this so much it's so sad and that makes it great! XD

I...This was beautiful :)

God... this was beautiful. That last bit reminded me of this book that I read a long time ago... the girl had lost one of her dearest friends, so she was screaming for herself, too. Anyway- you're a very talented writer. And it's not depressing; it's very heartfelt! :)

I'm so immensely pleased with how cute and sad and angsty this all turned out, I'm glad I clicked on this. My feels hurt, but it was really well written and descriptive, I mean, I love it.

And Wheatley. TT

This made me sad. Ouch. Right in the feels.
Great story, though. Excuse me while I go cry somewhere..

Well, this is certainly not what I expected when I clicked on this. I enjoyed the ending lines very much, but I have to warn you: maybe it's just me, but the story didn't make much sense. The beginning did, but as it went on, I found myself a bit confused as to what was going on. You might want to check up on this. Good job with your descriptive language, though.

Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX

That's it missy, I'm putting you on my authors alerts. Just keep churning out wonderful Chelley for me, please :)

*wipes eyes quickly on hand* I'm not crying! I'm not...totally not...sniffling like an idiot who... Oh, why even bother? *breaks down in tears*